Day 114 – Eyes – 50 Word Story

“Is it over?” She asks.

“It’s over thanks to you, now rest up, you’ll be okay,” he says as he runs a hand through her blood soaked hair, she laughs softly.

“You still haven’t got this lying thing down yet, your eyes give it away,” she says, closing her eyes.


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4 Comments Add yours

  1. sheldonk2014 says:

    Death is not an easy thing to practice

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    1. When two people are close, and they know each other, inside out and out, lies are almost impossible to hide… But death, death is something someone should never have to lie about.

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  2. mySestina says:

    He seems to be very powerful here..emotionally powerful.

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