Day 143 Daily Prompt – Graceful – 50 Word Story

“Now, can you tell the detective what you told me ma’am,” the officer says.

She looks over to the detective, and clears her throat, “Like I said, it was about fifteen minutes before I heard her scream, and there was this guy, dancing on her balcony, all graceful and shit.”

Graceful is today’s Daily Prompt

Go HERE for the 50 Word Story Expanded version of this story, or, if you’re feeling game, try to extend it yourself….

8 Comments Add yours

  1. Dead Donovan says:

    Whoa Matthew! You’re writing is off the wall, man. I’m having a tough time choosing which story I want to work on. GOOD stuff.

    I’m not reading any of your extended stories just yet, so I don’t get intimidated. I just wanted to tell you that I’m having fun stalking your stories.

    ~Poet Rummager

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    1. Thanks so much, I really enjoy the concept of making a moment count, I mean, it’s what I normally do anyway, but 50 words make it so much more important. I’m glad you’re enjoying them!

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    2. I had the hardest time choosing mine, so I just expanded the first one that my brain went crazy over, I’ve got other ideas from some more of yours and Karina’s, but, I think the ones that I sent in worked, so I’ll sit and be happy with them 👍


  2. Jenn Moss says:

    Nice description, lol! Looking forward to the expanded version.

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    1. Thanks, I’m interested to see where it will go, do I start before it, or after it?? Hmmm

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  3. “All graceful and shit”. Awesome end to an awesome story.

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    1. Thanks so much, I had such a defined idea, how it was all going to take place, and then as soon as I started typing, this happened. I liked it way better than what was in my head, and I’m glad it works. Thanks so much for your feed back again.

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