Day 149 Daily Prompt – Border – 50 Word Story

“When I stepped through the gate, and I crossed the border into this world, I knew that the killings would stop. But, but I didn’t think, I didn’t expect, that it would be…” He looks up at the shape, hiding in the shadows.

“You didn’t expect it to be you?”

 

You can read the expanded version HERE and, as a rare bonus, you can read Jac Forsyth’s fantastic tale based around this short, over HERE.

Border is today’s Daily Prompt

11 Comments Add yours

  1. James says:

    The killings stopped because the killer stepped into another world. Well done.

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  2. jac forsyth says:

    That’s so brilliant. I have so many stories jumping around in my head. Post the extended version soon.

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    1. Haha, I have to write it first, but I’ve got ideas, it will be interesting to see which one becomes.

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    2. Maybe you should write one of them down, expand your own version 👍

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      1. jac forsyth says:

        Haha, okay. Let’s do this.

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      2. Haha, I look forward to see where it takes you 👍

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      3. jac forsyth says:

        So I’m gonna credit you and put a link to the original blog if that’s okay?

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      4. I’ll put a link from the original to your extended version as well 👍

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      5. jac forsyth says:

        See you on the other side 😱

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