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Rushing,

desperately,

to set the trap,

twisting,

turning,

the words to contain it,

switching,

changing,

everything I can,

ripping,

tearing,

at everything I am,

searching,

screaming,

asking for an answer,

gushing,

flowing,

forming red sticky puddles,

crying,

praying,

asking for forgiveness,

bright,

light,

dimming in the darkness,

it’s too late!

5 Comments Add yours

  1. Samantha says:

    I loved reading this and it sounded even more amazing when I read it out loud. Simple but catchy and strong. It’s a well written piece this

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks so much, I always find it amazing how just reading something out loud can change everything about it. Thanks again ๐Ÿ‘

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Samantha says:

        Yeah reading out loud is powerful at times and you are welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Z. says:

    I love the sense of urgency and panic conveyed in this piece. Like a final desperate leap and a sudden stop that yields still no answers. Beautifully done!

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    1. Thanks so much, it’s what I was after๐Ÿ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

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